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1、四六级作文的五大类型四六级作文的五大类型 图表图画型图表图画型 对立观点型对立观点型 解决问题型解决问题型 应用写作型应用写作型 谚语警句型谚语警句型2013年12月四级作文真题呈现第一套：Give a brief account of the impact of the Internet on communication and explain whether electronic communication can replace face to face contact.“Dear Andy.How are you?Your mother and I are fine.We both m

2、iss you and hope you are doing well.We look forward to seeing you again next time your computer crashes and you come downstairs for something to eat.Love,Mom and Dad.”2013年12月四级作文真题呈现第二套：The Impact of the Internet on learning then explain why education doesnt simply mean learning to obtain informati

3、on.“Once I know how to use Google,isnt that all the education I really need?”2013年12月四级作文真题呈现 第三套 Give a brief account of the increasing use of mobile phones in peoples life and explain the consequences of overusing mobile phones.People are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using

4、walking sticks in order to see.漫画作文三段式结构漫画作文三段式结构 第一段：描述图画、第一段：描述图画、点明图画寓意。点明图画寓意。第二段：阐述图画寓意第二段：阐述图画寓意第三段：总结第三段：总结漫画作文万能句型漫画作文万能句型 第一段：describe the drawing briefly As is vividly portrayed/depicted in the cartoon/picture,The picture vividly depicts This cartoon humorously presents a scene of In the p

5、icture presented to us,there is At first sight of the picture,第二段：第二段：explain the intended meaning It is most likely that the drawer means to reflect a problem in the present society.Apparently,the aim/purpose of the picture is to illustrate that/to emphasize the importance of The phenomenon reveale

6、d in the drawing appears alarming/thought-provoking.第三段：第三段：give your comments It is my view that,In my opinion,To sum up,As far as I am concerned,I think this phenomenon is good/harmful to all of us.Therefore,it is high time we took effective measures to solve this problem.四六级图画作文模板四六级图画作文模板 It see

7、ms to me that the cartoon/drawing is sending a message about _（图画内容），which reveals _（稍作评价）.Apparently,_（将个人观点和图片内容相结合，（将个人观点和图片内容相结合，得出观点。）得出观点。）For one thing,_（从社会角度论（从社会角度论证）证）.For another thing,_（从个人角度说（从个人角度说明）明）.For example,_（自己、朋友或他人，的（自己、朋友或他人，的例子）例子）.Last but not least,_（从反面角度谈（从反面角度谈论）论）.As

8、 a result,the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _（建议或措施）（建议或措施）.Only in this way can we _（展望结果）（展望结果）.In conclusion/To my understanding,_（再次表明观点或态度）（再次表明观点或态度）.We should _（进（进一步说明个人的观点）一步说明个人的观点）.Practice:WritingCET-4 writing图表式作文写作图表式作文写作 第一步：开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题本图表所反映的主题 即 describe the table

9、第二步：分析数据间的主要差异及趋势主要差异及趋势 explain the trend 第三步：归纳总结或发表评论。opinion/suggestions conclusion facts:+reasons your own opinion/suggestions 图表描述应注意的问题图表描述应注意的问题 1.要突出重点，抓住图表中的极端点（起点，终点，抓住图表中的极端点（起点，终点，拐点）拐点）2.总趋势的描述必须准确。要抓住主要特征。要抓住主要特征。3.数据的描述必须选择重点，不能事无巨细。选择重点，不能事无巨细。4.不能主观捏造不能主观捏造没有的信息。描述要客观描述要客观，不能出现“I g

10、uess”“we think”等表明个人观点的文字 5.描述图表要注意时态注意时态，过去发生的事用一般过去时，经常发生的用一般现在时，整篇第一句往往用一般现在时。6.句子结构力求变化句子结构力求变化，要注意分词短语和其他小短语的穿插运用。具体写法具体写法 图表的种类：图表的种类：line graphbar chartpie charttablev According to the table/pie chart/line graph/bar graph,we can see/conclude thatv The table/graph reveals(shows/indicates/illus

11、trates/represents/points out)thatv As we can see from the tablev As can be seen from the line/bar graphv As is shown(illustrated/indicated)in the pie chart描述增减变化的句型 1.The number of grew/rose from to 2.An increase is shown in;then came a sharp increase of/decline 3.In the number remains the same/drop

12、s to 4.There was a very slight/small/slow/gradual/rapid/marked/sudden/sharp/dramatic drop/decline/decrease/fall in compared with that of last year.1.interpret the chart,and2.give your comments大学四年兼职比例统计大学四年兼职比例统计 第一段 This is a bar graph showing the percentage of the college students doing part-time

13、jobs during the four years study in college.It can be seen clearly from the graph that the proportion increased slightly from the first year to the third year,however,the fourth year has witnessed a fast increase,jumping to 88.24%.第二段第二段 There is no denying that this trend is very common in current

14、colleges.To begin with,students major task in their first year in college is to study,not to work.They have to lay a profound knowledge base so that they can be well prepared for the future work.That explains why only 67.77%of them took part-time jobs.Whats more,when students are going to step out o

15、f school and enter into the society,they have to gain lots of experience,so they need to have some part-time jobs especially in grade 4.Finally,students can make some money,which helps to unload their familiesfinancial burden.第三段第三段 Due to the analysis above,I think we have to strike a balance betwe

16、en your study and the job.Study is our major task while a part time job is a minor one though work experience is desirable.四六级作文的五大类型四六级作文的五大类型 对立观点型对立观点型辩论式议论文辩论式议论文 A有人认为有人认为X 是好事，赞成是好事，赞成X，为什么？为什么？B有人认为有人认为X 是坏事，是坏事，反对反对X，为什么？，为什么？C我的看法。我的看法。Writing A有人认为现在的大学生军训没有必要有人认为现在的大学生军训没有必要 B有人则认为很有必要有人则

17、认为很有必要 C我认为我认为 Writing Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持支持X 的第一个原因。的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持支持X 的另一个原因。的另一个原因。However,other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对反对X 的第一个理由。的第一个理由。An example

18、 can give the details of this argument is:一个例子。一个例子。There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.四级作文模板四级作文模板 对比选择题型：对比选择题型：When it comes to_,different people hold different views.Some contend that_.For one thing,_.For another,_.In spite of all th

19、ese claims,others maintain that _，They point out that_.Another instance often cited is that_.Its no easy task to find a satisfactory answer to the issue.As for me,theres some truth to both arguments.Its advisable to _.四六级作文的五大类型四六级作文的五大类型 解决问题型解决问题型社会问题（现象）式社会问题（现象）式 A一个社会问题或者现象。一个社会问题或者现象。B 产生的原因以及

20、社会和我们生活的影响产生的原因以及社会和我们生活的影响 D 如何杜绝如何杜绝(如果是问题的话如果是问题的话)或前景的预测。或前景的预测。Writing解决方法题型：解决方法题型：In recent days,we have to face a problem._is becoming more and more serious.First,_(说明A的现状).Second,_(举例进一步说明现状)Confronted with _,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one t

21、hing,_(解决方法一).For another_(解决方法二).Finally,_(解决方法三).Personally,I believe that _(我的解决方法).Consequently,Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because _(带来的好处).四六级作文的五大类型四六级作文的五大类型 应用写作型应用写作型应用文应用文 1.1.邀请信邀请信（20132013年考研英语小年考研英语小作文出过）作文出过）1）邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间）邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点；和地点；2）与该活动有关的注意事项；）与

22、该活动有关的注意事项；3）期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感）期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢。谢。Dear Professor,We are writing this letter to inquire the possibility of inviting you to deliver a lecture on American literature for our postgraduate students on the evening of June 16.All of us believe your lecture will benefit our students and teaching

23、 staff alike.If you can manage to come,please tell us the number of your flight and we will meet you at the airport.If you cant make it,please also let us know.We are looking forward to your coming.Sincerely yours,Li Ming2.2.申请信申请信 助学贷款申请信助学贷款申请信 1、个人情况介绍、个人情况介绍 2、申请贷款的原因、数额及用途、申请贷款的原因、数额及用途 3、如何保证专

24、款专用以及你的还、如何保证专款专用以及你的还款打算款打算 Dear Sir/Madam,I am a sophomore in Shanghai University,majoring in computer software.Since I registered here,the expenses have become a burden for my family.So Im applying to your bank for a loan of 10,000 yuan.If my application is approved,all the money will go to my tu

25、ition and fees for the coming academic years.Ive made a detailed plan to arrange my school life.A job as a family tutor will be easy to find.I guarantee that I will repay the loan within five years.Please have confidence in me:I have a very good credit record.I would be greatly obliged if my applica

26、tion is granted.Many thanks.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 3.3.道歉信道歉信 Dear Mr Wang,Im writing you this letter to apologize for my failing to hand in the paper on time.Im very sorry for the convenience brought by my delay.Please accept my sincere apology.The reason for my delay was that I caught a cold.I wa

27、s too weak to write a single word.I hope you will understand me and excuse me for my delay.However,I would do my utmost to finish the paper and hand it in as soon as possible.I assure you that I will hand in my homework on time from now on.Sincerely yours,Wu Hua4.4.感谢信感谢信 Dear Lucy,I am writing to e

28、xpress my sincere thanks for your beautiful flowers.You have a genius for selecting the right gift.I shall ever remember this gift as one of the most precious things in my life.I repeat my thanks again for your lovely flowers.Please give my kind regards to your family.Yours truly,Huck5.5.投诉信投诉信 2012

29、2012年考研英语小作文年考研英语小作文 Directions Suppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day,write an email to the customer service center to 1)make a complaint and 2)demand a prompt solution You should write about 100 words on ANSERE SHEET

30、 2 Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter,Use zhang wei instead。20122012年考研英语小作文参考范文年考研英语小作文参考范文 Dear Sir or Madame,As one of the regular customers of your online store,I am writing this letter to express my complaint against the flaws in your product an electronic dictionary I bought in

31、 your shop the other day.The dictionary is supposed to be a favorable tool for my study.Unfortunately,I found that there are several problems.To begin with,when I opened it,I detected that the appearance of it had been scratched.Secondly,I did not find the battery promised in the advertisement poste

32、d on the homepage of your shop,which makes me feel that you have not kept your promise.What is worse,some of the keys on the keyboard do not work.I strongly request that a satisfactory explanation should be given and effective measures should be taken to improve your service and the quality of your

33、products.You can either send a new one to me or refund me my money in full.I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Zhang Wei四六级作文的五大类型四六级作文的五大类型 谚语警句型谚语警句型2013年年12月英语六级作文真题月英语六级作文真题 1.Directions：For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about

34、the impact of information explosion by referring to the saying a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information?You should write at least 150 words but no more th

35、an 200 words.2.Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying“Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them.”You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to

36、 deal with problems and be happy.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.名言警句型六级作文写作思路名言警句型六级作文写作思路 本题型还是按照三段式。第一段：引用+深意，引出论点。第二段：举例论证论点。第三段：给出问题的解决方法。引用引用+深意句型深意句型 As a famous/witty/meaningful/instructive saying goes,_.Simple as the saying is,the message it conveys is profoun

37、d and thought-provoking.Evidently,it is meant to tell us that _.举例说明句型举例说明句型 Actually,history abounds with examples to prove this saying.Taking a look around,we can also find examples too many to enumerate.Here I can think of no better illustration of the proverb than my own experience.解决办法句型解决办法句型

38、Personally,I would like to _.In a word,I truly agree with the saying given in the directions/I truly understand the profound meaning of the proverb and I would take the right actions in my life and work in the future.Opening Sentences资深四六级作文评分专家透露：误解：误解：高分=读起来是读起来是好文章正解：正解：高分=看起来像看起来像好文章评分扫两点（错点错点&亮

39、点亮点）开头句首当其冲，一定要注意两点：减少失误（拼写、语法、字迹）升级语言应对改卷的五大策略应对改卷的五大策略1、字迹清楚，段落明朗段落明朗 2、内容完整，紧扣提纲紧扣提纲3、首句正确，再求闪光首句正确，再求闪光4、先总后分，连词连词用上5、语言简练，内容得当Opening Sentences开头句大众脸：With the development of science and technology,our life is more and more convenient.Opening Sentences开头句明星脸：With the expansion of IT application,

40、our life is of increasing convenience.作文常用的亮点词汇作文常用的亮点词汇 1.用exceedingly/extremely/intensely替换very；2.用an army of/a great many/a host of替换a lot of；3.用advancement替换development；4.positive/favorable/promising/pleasurable/outstanding/superior替换good；5.用give rise to/lead to/result in替换cause6.用take the attitude that/hold the view that替think that；7.用beneficial/rewarding替换helpful；8.用bear in mind that替换remember；9.用shopper/consumer/purchaser替换customer。作文常用的亮点词汇作文常用的亮点词汇